Not Bad

I rather liked the animation in the video, far better than most of the shit in the portal, i just have a few constructive criticixms for your next flash.

1. Sound: Try to make the sound a bit more flowing. I noticed the sound just kinda stopped or started. Try to fade in, or connect the it to previous sounds, so it doesn't just, ya know, start.

2. As i said, i like the animation it self, however, they idea behind the animation is a bit overdone. If you can break away from the

Guy surrounded by other guys, kills guys after he seems like he'd loose

story, your animations will be more likely to get better reviews. A good story is integral to a good animation.

Good luck with future endeavors

Fucking...

...pointless. thats about the 13472094609237460978324096872349076th time ive seen something get killed. There needs to be more in a movie then just a senseless death. Try again loser.