I rather liked the animation in the video, far better than most of the shit in the portal, i just have a few constructive criticixms for your next flash.
1. Sound: Try to make the sound a bit more flowing. I noticed the sound just kinda stopped or started. Try to fade in, or connect the it to previous sounds, so it doesn't just, ya know, start.
2. As i said, i like the animation it self, however, they idea behind the animation is a bit overdone. If you can break away from the
Guy surrounded by other guys, kills guys after he seems like he'd loose
story, your animations will be more likely to get better reviews. A good story is integral to a good animation.
Good luck with future endeavors
...pointless. thats about the 13472094609237460978324096872349076th time ive seen something get killed. There needs to be more in a movie then just a senseless death. Try again loser.
Whoa, if that's what you want then search somewhere other than NG cuz thats wat 80% of it is
How in God's name does this have a 3.25 and what the hell is with the portal today. This will be my 5th blam.
To the author: Go fall in a well and drown. That was the worst movie ive seen today.
you havent seen much today then
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